假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.

　　答案

　　When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I {C}{C}{C}{C}I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in {C}{C}{C}{C}

　　{C}{C}countryside.There the air is clean {C}{C}{C}{C}the mountains are green.Unfortunately，{C}{C}{C}{C}the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have {C}{C}{C}{C}

　　{C}{C}shown that global warming has already become a very {C}{C}problem.The {C}{C}{C}{C}we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.{C}{C}{C}{C}rare animals are dying out.We must {C}{C}{C}{C}ways to protect {C}{C}{C}{C}environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.

　　1.解析 考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。

　　答案 第2句：think→thought

　　2.解析 考查冠词的用法。in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。

　　答案 第3句：countryside前加the

　　3.解析 考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。

　　答案 第4句：or→and

　　4.解析 考查介词的用法。with the development of...为一固定短语，意思是“随着……的发展”。

　　答案 第5句：on→with

　　5.解析 考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。

　　答案 第6句：去掉been

　　6.解析 考查形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。

　　答案 第6句：seriously→serious

　　7.解析 考查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。

　　答案 第7句：airs→air

　　8.解析 考查代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数，故用many。

　　答案 第8句：Much→Many

　　9.解析 考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。

　　答案 第9句：found→find

　　10.解析 考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。

　　答案 第9句：your→our

　　Passage 2(2015·新课标全国Ⅱ)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　答案

　　One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his {C}{C}{C}{C}.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy {C}{C}{C}{C}a shop window.He liked it so {C}{C}{C}{C}

　　{C}{C}much that he quickly walked into the shop.After {C}{C}at the toy for some time，he turned around and found {C}{C}{C}{C}

　　{C}{C}his parents were missing.Tony was scared and {C}{C}{C}{C}to cry.A woman saw him crying and {C}{C}{C}{C}him to wait outside {C}{C}{C}{C}shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw {C}{C}{C}{C}

　　{C}{C}parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were {C}{C}{C}{C}worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　1.解析 考查名词复数。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。

　　答案 第1句：parent→parents

　　2.解析 考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。

　　答案 第3句：on→in

　　3.解析 考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so...that...为固定句型，意思是“如此……以致于……”，故去掉very。

　　答案 第4句：去掉very

　　4.解析 考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he，he与look at之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。

　　答案 第5句：looks→looking

　　5.解析 考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。